This is a nice idea. If you want my opinion, though, the Soldier’s position in the last panel somehow isn’t convincing enough. His face is excellent, but his pose, I can’t quite put my finger on it, but it needs to better sell the idea that he’s throwing away the scroll, without context, you could imagine that the Soldier is trying to catch the scroll in the last panel.
Also, someone pointed out how you used bloodied hands in the third panel, which, uuh, what is? (And another person lost an opportunity to say “9 years”).
Hope this doesn’t come out as hating, it’s just my opinion 😉