That’s actually really good, I was surprised. I was just expecting a bunch of little kids “dancing” by pressing the spacebar a bunch of times. You’re obviously very talented. The camera movement techniques seemed rather professional to me, but nobody’s going to take you seriously for no other reason outside of it being made on Roblox, unfortunately. The way the “camera” moves around the set is really nice to watch and gives off a feeling that’s a little more personal than just being an audience member. If you want some criticism, I’d say that the constant jump cuts can be jarring at times, but it is a music vide###########pose that’s just the style. Also, reusing shots is something I’d strongly advise against.

But yeah, it’s great! Try applying your talent to the real world. Get some of the drama kids from your school to be in a little amateur film of yours. I don’t know what kind of feedback you’re looking for, I just assumed that you’re an aspiring filmmaker or whatever and you’re having a bit of fun on Roblox.