But seriously, if you’re going to steal someone’s idea do it at least with a grain of dignity. You had no idea what I was going to incorporate into the story to get Asriel into that position to begin with. Your fanfic has no buildup and no style. You can’t cut straight to the action, that’s not erotic that’s desperate. Everything in your story is out in the open to begin with, nothing is left to the imagination except what fucking shouldn’t be. My story has subtlety and nuance that your feeble mind couldn’t dream of writing. Before you steal someone’s idea make sure you fucking have the balls to write an actual story instead of just a quick wank that’s easily forgotten about. Both characters have so much depth it’s impossible to imagine you could write them so flatly and uninspired. Take your chicken-scratch rip-off and shove it right back up the asshole you shat it out of.