1. The paper has a thesis statement expressed the essential features of somethings succinctly what an essay is about and how it will defend its claim. It’s a strong thesis statement makes a discussion or argument claim others may disagree with. In a educated and a scholarship writing, the thesis most commonly appears in the first paragraph. The body paragraph is passionate and interesting because that was when I got more an individual feature, facts, or item. 
2. The essay start when a interesting title and it make you want to read my essay. The conclusion end with a really powerful and the essay had a strong consists of three sentences minimum. It is equally developed because I put most of it all in order and the way I explain the president in the essay  was good. My title for my essay will grab a readers attention to want too read my essay. 
3. There is database is some of my paragraph. I had a collection of processed information that i gave out an related to a particular subject and plot. I had a persuasive writing, but I am using strong writing and never stretch fact to be strong on your argument. They support my topic sentence a little because it was a little hard to make it go with the topic sentence. 
4. My essay has a lot of the standard grammar used by educated people in an English-speaking country. The essay is understandable if you understand where I am coming from and if you know how the presidents was. 
5. My reaction to my paper is that I think I did good but I know I can do better. I feel like on doing this essay I learned a lot more about the president back in the day. And I learn that some of the president really did do good job for are county. The main thing I will do in my essay to improve it will be having more is add more of a argument behind the president.